The English Department of Semarang State University
I study English education at Semarang State University. English education is a part of the English Department which is one of the most wanted departments in Semarang State University. The Department of English is devided into two majors: English education and English literature. Both education and literature maintain its good quality in creating the best graduates of English program.
The English department is located in B3 building. The building is clean and comfortable. It has many rooms, such as some lecture rooms, the lecturers’ rooms, an administration office, two toilets, a prayer room (musholla), a library, two language labs, etc. Each room gives its own contribution to the students and lecturers. That's why I proud of being a part of the English Department of Semarang State University.
4 komentar:
Hi nisa, good writing :) However, I will give you some suggestions: in the first sentence you'd better to write ''I am studying English education at Semarang State University'', because you're still studying in UNNES.
''The Department of English is devided into two majors'', the word devided isn't correct, you should change it to be divided.
Ok, just it from me, happy writing. :)
Thank you for your suggestion, Aulya! :)
Yes, you are right. There is a typo. I should be more careful in the next writing. :)
this is good. I agree with aulya but I want to add something. in the fourth sentence paragraph one, you write "Both education and literature". I think its better if you change that with "both of them" thanks,
Great writing Nisa. However, I think it will be better if you give us information where the B3 building is. I mean you also give us as the reader the faculty of your department so it will more specific.
Thank you : )
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